Yeow! Terrific love scene, perfect little story. Beautifully set up; great Ray voice. The whole thing is sweet as pineapple on pizza.
And yeah, I'm in all right, letting myself be drawn like a magnet, like a fish on a line, and I push as he pulls because it isn't fast enough. The wet slide of his mouth is intoxicating, addicting, I'm drowning in it. I open mine under his, and his tongue is slicksoft, and holy fuck, I love the drowning.
That whole passage is especially terrific. A first kiss between these two--how many have we, collectively, written? Hundreds? Thousands?--and it's fresh and original and feels like the first one ever written. That's a gift to fandom, that is. :)
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And yeah, I'm in all right, letting myself be drawn like a magnet, like a fish on a line, and I push as he pulls because it isn't fast enough. The wet slide of his mouth is intoxicating, addicting, I'm drowning in it. I open mine under his, and his tongue is slicksoft, and holy fuck, I love the drowning.
That whole passage is especially terrific. A first kiss between these two--how many have we, collectively, written? Hundreds? Thousands?--and it's fresh and original and feels like the first one ever written. That's a gift to fandom, that is. :)
Oh, yeah...F/K kisses ARE the best!